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jdmsauce



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PostPosted: Sun Jan 01, 2012 5:40 pm    Post subject: C/S long exposure Reply with quote

i just want some feedback. dont be afraid to point out the flaws.

thank you




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Tawnya
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 02, 2012 12:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like it. My eye keeps hunting for more detail in the top, but I do like it!
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BenUdkow
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 02, 2012 4:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think it works much better if you crop the top 1/3 off.
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jdmsauce



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PostPosted: Wed Jan 04, 2012 8:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i fixed the problem. i agree that cropping it looks a lot better, but theres always room for improvements. any more suggestions?

thank you.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 04, 2012 9:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not "problems", "opportunities". Smile

I like it now. Good S-curve through the photo.
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 07, 2012 9:26 pm    Post subject: Re: C/S long exposure Reply with quote

This is awesome! Where is this place?

jdmsauce wrote:
i just want some feedback. dont be afraid to point out the flaws.

thank you



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jdmsauce



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PostPosted: Wed Jun 27, 2012 2:11 pm    Post subject: Re: C/S long exposure Reply with quote

hunterstella wrote:
This is awesome! Where is this place?

jdmsauce wrote:
i just want some feedback. dont be afraid to point out the flaws.

thank you




It's at Mormon temple next to Warren freeway in Oakland.
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